yipes! this isn't looking good -- i actually started off the post with chapter 11 by saying it wasn't much of a chapter!
okay, let's get going. i guess we can hope i was wrong ...
snort! i'd forgotten that instead of tv, the androids have holo-projectors, which abbreviates to "hp." i'm just killing myself with these computer puns!
cmd+entertainment! ahahahaha!!!
holy smokes, the whole first paragraph is one hilarious techno-jargon wordplay after another. i mean, if i was trying to find a way to make info-dump exposition a total kick to read, i couldn't have come up with a much better way to do it.
anyhow, the scoop is, all bitsy has available to get her mind off cord is her hp favorites list, and she can't manage even a little enthusiasm for any of it. instead she just mopes about it and wonders if she ought to go to theraputery and then realizes she couldn't possibly explain to a theraputist why she was feeling off. they might think she was glitching or crashing -- which makes her start worrying maybe she is crashing.
wowzers, turns out i was totally wrong! it's short, but this is a heck of a chapter, if i say so myself.
so ...
time to write more -- right?
xoxo,
claire
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