Wednesday, August 26, 2026

review! love and realness, chapter 10!

bitsy gets to work all worried people will notice she's out of sorts ... but the whole office is oblivious to her. nobody has any reason to ask her what's up except gigory, who certainly doesn't. kind of tickled with myself for pulling that twist on poor bits. she may be borderline too hapless, but it's fun seeing her flail around in her obsession only to have no one even notice her flailing. then she works herself up to talk to her friend about it at lunch and realizes she can't actually say anything without either embarrassing herself with how badly she handled the coffee date and gigory, or else giving away a big secret like cord being real or working in dream feed management.

and then things get even worse for our heroine, because she realizes that maybe cord told her a heap of hogwash to get rid of her once he saw what a ditz she was.

you've got to feel for this girl. she's her own worst enemy.

anyway, we're back to short chapter format this time, and that's really all that happens.

only one chapter left before ... time to write more???

xoxo,
claire

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